Limerick (10)
There was a young lady from Riga
who fancied a ride on a tiger.
They came back from the ride
with the lady inside
and a smile on the face of the tiger.
There was a young lady from Riga
who fancied a ride on a tiger.
They came back from the ride
with the lady inside
and a smile on the face of the tiger.
Kenne ich ein bisschen anders:
There was an old lady from Riga
Donnerstag, 28. Juni 2007, 13:24 Uhr von isabowho rode with a smile on a tiger.
They returned from the ride
with the lady inside
and the smile on the face of the tiger.
Ist klar die bessere Version, wegen dem smile-smile. Und returned ist natürlich auch eleganter. Muss ich gleich mal mein Handgeschriebenes ändern.
Donnerstag, 28. Juni 2007, 14:44 Uhr von Nic